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I hear one shot
A body hits the ground
Another shot
That makes two
I hear another
That’s a third shot
A scream approaches towards me
A girl runs towards me
Her eyes filled with fear and pain
Her arm was stabbed
A bullet hole through her chest
Her body falls
Falls to the ground
Her body soulless, helpless
Just lying there
Lying in the moist grass
All I do is stare at her lifeless body
Stare with emotionless eyes
I hear another shot of a gun
Another body hits the ground
But this time it’s my body
My body hits the ground
I’m lying there soulless, helpless
I’m lying there in the moist, moist grass.
©2007-2009 ~blondeaquarius
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i love this pece and i am proud of it.

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:iconnatari-teh-animator:
wow

thats heaps good

best ive ever read from you

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RIP my beloved paper dolls~
:iconblondeaquarius:
thanks i'll like to let you know i got an A+ for it too!!!!!!!!!!!!

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one kiss and a hug will show you my love
:iconerebus-2000:
woah....

damn, that's good

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Glad to have sat under
Thunder and rain with you
:iconblondeaquarius:
thank you :bow:

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one kiss and a hug will show you my love
:iconebony4eva:
Very nice. Was there a hidden meaning in there?

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"Man cannot persist long in a conscious state; he must throw himself back into the Unconscious, for his roots live there." - Goethe, 1749-1832

Just remember: It's all in your head. Literally.

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